A reflection
This was the best feedback I’ve received on an assignment yet, my peers reviewed what I’ve changed so far and informed me to remove my introduction because it wasted time and the attention of my listeners, what’s included in these apps, to not run at such a slow pace but to be quicker in my presentation because it was more engaging to my listeners.
What’s changed
It’s almost memorized but I keep including more important points every presentation that bring it all together, I am definitely more comfortable in front of the camera getting my presentation down after just three videos, I think the pitch is definitely better now including what’s inside the app.
Hi Lauren,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your final draft of this video! I enjoyed your content from last week, but it is so evident that you have taken your constructive criticism to heart and further refined your presentation. Your tone and delivery was much more engaging and you provided great details about your app. I would only suggest elaborating on your distribution model and expectations for how to market your app. Otherwise, great work!