Hey Lauren!! Great job!! The video and elevator pitch are clean, professional, and present. You have a very clear and concise message for your intended consumer. One thing that you might want to consider in future videos and takes of this elevator pitch is volume. The volume throughout was a little low. I think that if the volume is a bit louder, you will appear more confident and energized. Again, great job!!
I think you did amazing on your first elevator pitch! You spoke at a good pace and provided a good breadth of information. I particularly liked how you included a bunch of different stats, as it showed that you were very knowledgeable regarding your product field. Going forward, I think it would help to use more hand gestures so that the pitch feels more interactive. Overall, incredible job!
Hey Lauren!! Great job!! The video and elevator pitch are clean, professional, and present. You have a very clear and concise message for your intended consumer. One thing that you might want to consider in future videos and takes of this elevator pitch is volume. The volume throughout was a little low. I think that if the volume is a bit louder, you will appear more confident and energized. Again, great job!!
ReplyDeleteHi Lauren!
ReplyDeleteI think you did amazing on your first elevator pitch! You spoke at a good pace and provided a good breadth of information. I particularly liked how you included a bunch of different stats, as it showed that you were very knowledgeable regarding your product field. Going forward, I think it would help to use more hand gestures so that the pitch feels more interactive. Overall, incredible job!